Article draft 2

Page one (Page on the left would be an advert)

PAge 2 and 3 (double page spread)

I have changed the composition and imagery of my article but I feel I still need to make it more 'girly'. I could do this by avoiding black and white images, add colour to my headlines and individual DR. Marten shoes to create a 'fun and pop' influence that I saw in BOP magazine.